sidelines mistakes

The Lady Raiders started fast in the first quarter, which is something that MT struggled with in the last game against Tennessee Tech. ( change mt to MTSU or Lady Raiders)

Stockstill currently sits 100 attempts short of Logan Kilgore for most passing attempts in a career with 1,035. (change attempts to passes)

he managed to help close out the Racers for the first of the Blue Raiders’ two road wins. (delete managed to)

Stockstill wasn’t in sync on the Blue Raiders first drive and was held to a “three-and-out.”( change in sync to on his game)

This recruiting class adds a little more star power to a roster that will be losing one of the programs all-time great players in Giddy Potts, as well as three other starters in Ed Simpson, Nick King and Brandon Walters. (add a comma at roster)

Upon arrival, police made contact with the store clerk. The clerk explained to police that two men entered the store and started yelling, “Open the cash drawer.”( delete upon arrival and add comma before clerk. and put as he explained)

Upon arrival, the officers found seven shell casings on the ground. The shell casings were collected and placed into evidence. The casings were then sent off to the Tennessee Bureau of Investigation for testing.(take out upon arival, delete the period and a comma)

Upon arrival, police spoke with the witness, who stated that a man was beating on his door and begging for help. (delete upon arrival)

The officers then spoke with the man, who stated that he “got jumped.”( replace man with victim)

But I couldn’t visit such a place and seclude my tastebuds of another potential purchase, so I also ordered the UT Dream Cream, which included Dreamsicle ice cream, orange cream soda, vanilla cream soda, whipped cream and an orange slice delicately placed on top. (“” around UT DreamCream)

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